Filming update 3

We have re filmed the sections in the park to make them more affective, after realising what we had filmed before was not any good. We have a few effective shots of first person attacks on me and my friend Rathe; a few generic shots of jumping out of bushes and chases. We thought these would be effective for a trailer as they don't really give anything away about the storyline, but are intense and will raise the questions and interest about how the characters have got into these situations. I have also filmed a longer section of my trailer in my girlfriend Chalice Bartholomew's house, with her acting. I've got a first person perspective of someone walking into her bedroom, while she is asleep. The camera looks around, then leans in over her. She jolts awake , realises that nothing is there, then lays back down. Then, suddenly she is rapidly dragged away, out of shot. I was thinking of putting this at the beginning of the trailer, as it will draw viewers in because it is very intriguing.